Wednesday, March 13, 2013

Day 66 of the 365 Days of Blogging

The author, Dane F. Baylis

Share My MUST Do List

 

This in no way constitues a fair question for an OCD writer who has been described as having a Triple 'A' personality!

 

 
 
1. Write.
 
2. Write.
 
3. Write.
 
4. Did I mention WRITE?
 
5. Remember, you're an "aspiring" writer.
 
6. Keep the day job.
 
7. Eat (Something other than black coffee, chocolate covered espresso beans and a handful of Oreo's).
 
8. Sleep (You cannot recall your own name never mind the name of the tenth minor character you scribbled obscure notes about on a pizza grease stained napkin in felt pen three months ago if you don't get some rest).
 
9. Look at the shelf above monitor level. See the pictures? Think hard. Those are members of your family. Come on, son, what are their names...?
 
10. Go outside for a walk.
 
11. If there is no outside then the Apocalypse has occured!
 
12. No outside? Stay inside and write a poem about it and call the Help Line. After the revision.
 
13. Still plenty of outside? Why are you screwing around? Get back to writing!
 
14. Yes, you've got a great idea...What about today's word count goal first...Nothing like ADD and coffee!
 
15. Inquiry letters to two publications...Nobody's perfect...Except you, we know.
 
16. Research more outlets. A story's only dead if it lays interred in the file drawer!
 
17. Have you looked at the next dozen poems in the journal lately? How do you read those? Come on, man, catch up with the typing.
 
18. If you insist on keeping on-going idea books on-going you need to stop and read them occasionally.
 
19. Let the answering machine take it!
 
20. Last, but never least...WRITE!
 
  

Accepting short fiction to 1200 words, poetry to 25 lines, and carefully crafted essays for the Your Work/Your Love page. Nope, still no pay, just glorious exposure! You can send your work to me via e-mail at dbaylis805@gmail.com. Authors retain all rights. You can also follow or subscribe to this blog. There are gadgets for that on the right side of this page. I love the company and it helps with the search engine ranking. Comments, critiques, and questions are always answered in as timely a manner as I can manage between my day job, writing, studies, blah, blah, blah. There's a form at the bottom of the page for your use.
In the meantime, remember...live, love, write.
Dane F. Baylis

 

Tuesday, March 12, 2013

Day 65 of the 365 Days of Blogging

The author, Dane F. Baylis

Here's A Sneak Peak At "RESIST" The Techno-Thriller I've Got In The Works

I Hear Any Lauging And I'm Gonna Kick Butts!

Major Joseph Aloysius Smith leaned against the side of the C-130 as it banked over the terrain below. What he was seeing was greasy smoke rising from several fires.  These billowing clouds obscured large swaths of the sear brown terrain. He cleared his throat to activate his intercom mike and said, “Boogey, wake up.”
There was a voice in his headset, “I’m not asleep.”
“Good. Take a look below.” He glanced toward the front of the cargo compartment as he pointed outside.
A compact black soldier stood up by the forward troop door and peered out its port. “Looks like Iraqi Freedom all over again.” The voice said inside Smith’s headset.
“They’re trying to beat reconnaissance aircraft out of any possible targets.”
“Drones any good in that shit?”
“Maybe the latest generation, they’re small, fast ground huggers… inexpensive and expendable.” There was a laugh in the headset. “What’s so funny?”
“You just described us!” The laughing grew louder.
Smith shook his head. If there was one thing he could count on from Sergeant Boogieman it was his wry sense of the absurd. That he was right was another story. Private military corporations were increasingly pervasive on the map of global conflict. Despite the high salaries they commanded individually, they were still cheaper than the service members of any particularly active international player. Tie that in with the fact that they were recruited from the elite units of industrialized or emerging nations and signed on knowing they were giving up the protection of whatever government had originally trained them for - as it was termed, “high risk/short duration” assignments, and their appeal as force multipliers was formidable.
Smith concentrated on the scene below. He’d memorized the details on the map in his right cargo pocket and was busy matching his mental image to the physical reality on the ground. The prevailing wind was out of the west and the smoke drifted from about a third of the way inside the city towards where the river should be. An occasional glint of silver through the smoke showed him where the water course lay.
The voice was back in his ear. It was serious now, with a business-like Congolese accent. “The bridges look like they’re still intact. We want the one furthest south, correct.”
“Roger that. Furthest from the insurgent zone so it’ll be the best route into the main urban hub.”
“I thought I saw one or two small craft but there’s nothing like commercial barges.”
“It’s the climate shift. Rain patterns have moved way north. River level is too low for large traffic. A lot of the cargo traffic’s overland now.”
“Wasn’t that river the main artery through here?”
“Yes, until they dredged all the way down to bedrock and couldn’t maintain a channel deep enough for even the shallowest draft haulers.”
“I read history books about this. The whole region was cotton plantations and slaves, no?”
“That was a long time ago, Boogey. The whole area turned over to grain crops. At least until the warming took over.”
There was a sudden flashing of lights and a warning buzzer sounded throughout the compartment. In his headset, a new voice spoke in a clipped and commanding tone, “Smith, we’re being painted by ‘Triple A’ radar. Tell your men to sit down and hold on, things are going to get a tad erratic.”
There was a swift rise to the engine noise and the aircraft banked suddenly to port. Smith and Boogieman were both pressed deep into the seat webbing. Around them men grunted and braced their feet wider against the deck. The aircraft pitched quickly in the opposite direction and there was the sound of the decoy flares being ejected behind them to confuse heat seeking devices. Smith could just get his head around enough to see out his port. Coming through the smoke below were two trails of missile exhaust climbing hard after them.
They banked back the other way and as they did Smith caught a familiar sight. Shining in the lowering sun was the Gateway Arch rising above their new area of operation, St. Louis, Missouri.
 
Accepting short fiction to 1200 words, poetry to 25 lines, and carefully crafted essays for the Your Work/Your Love page. Nope, still no pay, just glorious exposure! You can send your work to me via e-mail at dbaylis805@gmail.com. Authors retain all rights. You can also follow or subscribe to this blog. There are gadgets for that on the right side of this page. I love the company and it helps with the search engine ranking. Comments, critiques, and questions are always answered in as timely a manner as I can manage between my day job, writing, studies, blah, blah, blah. There's a form at the bottom of the page for your use.
In the meantime, remember...live, love, write.
Dane F. Baylis
 


Monday, March 11, 2013

Day 64 of the 365 Days of Blogging

The author, Dane F. Baylis

Why Speed Isn't Everything

 

Self-published or Self-punished?

 

Hi, it's your Uncle Dane again, you know--the old guy over there in the top left corner--back with another helpful hint. Like I've said, I'm into the traditional route when it comes to my publishing goals and, even for me, there are some things that are about as much fun as going commando in bluejeans with a heat rash. Like when you spend all that time editing the hell out of something and, after a publisher's been nice enough to say, "Okay. We guess.", you get it back and there's a laundry list of 'suggested' changes and improvements. I looked up "suggest" in The Oxford English Dictionary  and they must be using something entirely different. So why not avoid all that crap and just sel-publish the stuff? No muss, no fuss...Easy-cheesy-lemon peasy. In no time at all there you are, on Amazon or some indie in less than half the time...No strain...No endless back and forth...You're an AUTHOR!
 
I've been going through quite a bit of that type of product lately...The ones who really left it doubtless they were in no mood to wait...Even for their own part of the job to be finished! Notice that in the previous paragraph I said I EDIT THE HELL OUT OF THINGS. Sometimes as many as 6, 8...how many ever times. I have made mention that I ask my wife to proof read and edit my work also and I will noodge other writers for favors. Why, if I'm doing all that prior editing, do I need external verification? Because these are my darlings and, every now and then, I'm just not as brutal with them as I should be.
 
So what's the purpose of all this? Well, I'd prefer that an editor at a publishing house, magazine, journal, or website didn't think I was a total moron. Or worse yet, that I actually thought it was THEIR JOB to fix my boneheaded mistakes. In other words, I'd like them to think of me as a serious WRITER.
 
So why in the name of everything sensible would someone doing the self-publishing thing jump through fewer hoops? In the business world I've always told clients there are three things they could ask for...1. Speed...2. Quality...3. Price. You can have any TWO simultaneously, but you can't get all three. If you speed something out the door and on to the market and you're going to offer it at the kind of prices you see on Amazon, then you are more than likely sacrificing quality. YOU haven't done YOUR work!
 
You are the editor and, if you can find someone else whose skills you trust more than your own,(NO I didn't say someone who would pat your ass and tell you how special you are) all the better. Go over this thing you want to inflict on the world and make sure it is as ready as you can make it. Why? Because there's so much crap out here it really only takes a bit of extra effort to rise above. Then, while others 'authors' are wondering why they aren't getting repeat customers or any notice, you at least stand a chance. I said 'a chance' don't let it go to your head...sheeeesh!
 
Just a helpful hint...I need a nap.
 
Accepting short fiction to 1200 words, poetry to 25 lines, and carefully crafted essays for the Your Work/Your Love page. Nope, still no pay, just glorious exposure! You can send your work to me via e-mail at dbaylis805@gmail.com. Authors retain all rights. You can also follow or subscribe to this blog. There are gadgets for that on the right side of this page. I love the company and it helps with the search engine ranking. Comments, critiques, and questions are always answered in as timely a manner as I can manage between my day job, writing, studies, blah, blah, blah. There's a form at the bottom of the page for your use.
In the meantime, remember...live, love, write.
Dane F. Baylis
 


Sunday, March 10, 2013

Day 63 of the 365 Days of Blogging

The author, Dane F. Baylis

Tell You About My Writing Schedule For March

Give Me A Second Alright?...ROTFLMFAO...Okay, That's Better.

(I'm sure If You've Been On The Internet For More Than Ten Minutes You Know What That Long List Of Letters Means.)

 
Schedule? How about this...I write...When I'm not induced (OR FORCED) to do something else...I WRITE! I just finished a new short story that my favorite editor...you have to marry them to keep them on your side...has at this point and we will, uh...discuss...her suggestions when she's done. This morning I was going through my poetry journals, a notebook and various other sources and compiling a new manuscript of my most recent verse. This is a follow up to one that is under consideration at this time. On the heels of that are the notes for another short story that has overtones of Steinbeck's Of Mice and Men. (I've admitted it before...and if you're truthful, so will you...I steal some of my best ideas! Don't try to tell me there's any new ones out there...I've been around too long to fall for that! There's just new ways of telling them.) 
 
All of this is in addition to the half dozen short works out to various publications, houses and journals since the beginning of the year. Then there is this blog, essays for the on-line course in Shin Buddhism I'm taking through the Center for Buddhist Education in Berkley, CA and, when I don't have anything else to do, I'm hammering my way through the first draft of a techno-thriller tentatively titled Resist that I hope to have done by early April.
 
I don't schedule my writing...I just write! I stay up late, I get up early, I take down time at my day job and I write. I write when I'm not the driver on outings or as a passenger on planes going someplace. I write in restaurants, waiting rooms and at the tire store. When I'm not writing I'm reading...Yes, Johnny, I read about f***ing writing! Magazine articles, how to's, self-directed study, other poor bastard's sob stories. Then I read for entertainment...Only even then it becomes a correspondence course of sorts because I read like a writer. I want to understand why a particular writer does it like this, while another does it like that. Why THAT word and not THIS? Why paragraphs of this length and not that...Why everything?
 
Why? Because there were so many before me who were so much better. There are so many who are my contemporaries who I so admire...Even if it's only for the simple turn of a single phrase...They thought of it and it is beautiful. Because one day I hope to be just a small part of all that. My writing schedule...All the damned time...How about yours?
 
 
Accepting short fiction to 1200 words, poetry to 25 lines, and carefully crafted essays for the Your Work/Your Love page. Nope, still no pay, just glorious exposure! You can send your work to me via e-mail at dbaylis805@gmail.com. Authors retain all rights. You can also follow or subscribe to this blog. There are gadgets for that on the right side of this page. I love the company and it helps with the search engine ranking. Comments, critiques, and questions are always answered in as timely a manner as I can manage between my day job, writing, studies, blah, blah, blah. There's a form at the bottom of the page for your use.
In the meantime, remember...live, love, write.
Dane F. Baylis

Saturday, March 9, 2013

Day 62 of the 365 Days of Blogging

The author, Dane F. Baylis

Tell You How I've Done On My 2013 Marketing Goals

This may seem a little unusual for me but I'm going to take a pretty straight forward run at this particular topic. The reason I'm going at it this way is that I'm actually pretty jazzed at how things are going! Have I had some kind of monumental success? Nope, nothing on a best seller list. No five book deal with a motion picture option. Not even a positive maybe recently on my normal almost sure thing of short fiction. So what the hell have I got to be so damned chipper about?
 
Well, this blog for one thing. This was one of those must haves I kept hearing about. You know, a cornerstone of your platform as a complete writer and author. Only thing is, as I've stated before, I'm old, and tend to get a little overwhelmed by the learning curve involved with some of the technology. I hemmed and hawed and kept putting it off in spite of many reassurances that it was far simpler than even I might require. Well, as is more than aggravatingly evident, here I am. Not only have I found the experience unpainful but I have begun to make the acquaintances of some fairly astounding people from all corners of this world. People who are involved in exactly the same thing I am in their own, unique ways. To all these new found acquaintances and colleagues I say thank-you for your time and contributions, those who simply bookmarked this blog and spread the word to their friends and continue to do so, those who have actively taken a part (whether we agreed or not) and those who continue to contribute here, on Google +, Facebook and by e-mail.
 
Then there are the people locally and not so who I have reconnected or connected with. To find out that, after an extended sabbatical, my name and work was still remembered and that it was familiar to a number of people I had never met and who considered it influential in their own pursuits, (or were kind enough to lie to me oh so sweetly), was a real kick in the pants. From my long ago past I look forward to our very mutual futures.
 
So, how are my 2013 marketing goals progressing. I have work out in the world, more in the pipe, a growing Internet presence and audience, and joy in every aspect of what I'm doing. Have I attained my 'goals'. Yes. No. Maybe. That about covers the short form. The greatest thing is making this trip and the people who I meet along the way that are making part of it with me or allowing me to make part of theirs. Here's to today, I'll worry about the rest after a nap.
 
Accepting short fiction to 1200 words, poetry to 25 lines, and carefully crafted essays for the Your Work/Your Love page. Nope, still no pay, just glorious exposure! You can send your work to me via e-mail at dbaylis805@gmail.com. Authors retain all rights. You can also follow or subscribe to this blog. There are gadgets for that on the right side of this page. I love the company and it helps with the search engine ranking. Comments, critiques, and questions are always answered in as timely a manner as I can manage between my day job, writing, studies, blah, blah, blah. There's a form at the bottom of the page for your use.
In the meantime, remember...live, love, write.
Dane F. Baylis

Friday, March 8, 2013

Day 61 of the 365 Days of Blogging

The author, Dane F. Baylis

Tell You How I've Done With My 2013 Publishing Goals

 

You Ever Wonder What The World Would Be Like Without Self-Publishing?

 

Well let me bring you up to speed there. You see I'm not a personal fan of the self-published route. Before I start hearing about the avenues opened to the independent artist and the greed and fickleness of the traditional publishers...blah, blah, blah. I didn't say I didn't think YOU should go that route. I said I wasn't going that way. At least not at the moment. I've been down the traditional route before and I agree it is a difficult and frustrating course. I also know that with each rejection and re-write (after I got done sobbing uncontrollably in a locked bathroom) I got better at my craft.
 
I'm not saying that you need to take every teeny thing an editor says to heart. Lets face it, no matter what declarations of objectivity are made, the publishing game is a highly subjective one. Perhaps you miss what they're looking for by a thin shading of mood. Maybe your dialogue is finely crafted but of to high or low a tone for them that day. Maybe they just plain are having a really bad afternoon when the pre-screener dumps your baby in the inbox and they notice that your first name is the same as their significant ex-other and, SLAM, you're screwed from the start!
 
I've had that feeling but I have also been fortunate enough to have failed with an editor or two who took the time to explain why. These were usually concise, to the point evaluations and occasionally included suggestions for improvement. There have even been the odd times when this was accompanied by an invitation to resubmit the manuscript with the changes for a second reading.
 
Do I do this because I have a lack of faith in my own work? No, I have taken this route because I believe that there are other ways to see what I'm after and I might even learn something. I have ignored some things as just not suited to where I'm going, but others have taken me down some very interesting roads.
 
What have been your experiences? Do you self-publish? Why? Have you tried the trad's? Small press or behemoths of the land? I'd really like to hear back on this as I am always looking for avenues and venues. Maybe we can help each other out? Or maybe it will just make for a good opportunity to get to know you, and me, better?
 
 
Accepting short fiction to 1200 words, poetry to 25 lines, and carefully crafted essays for the Your Work/Your Love page. Nope, still no pay, just glorious exposure! You can send your work to me via e-mail at dbaylis805@gmail.com. Authors retain all rights. You can also follow or subscribe to this blog. There are gadgets for that on the right side of this page. I love the company and it helps with the search engine ranking. Comments, critiques, and questions are always answered in as timely a manner as I can manage between my day job, writing, studies, blah, blah, blah. There's a form at the bottom of the page for your use.

In the meantime, remember...live, love, write.
Dane F. Baylis

Thursday, March 7, 2013

Day 60 of the 365 Days of Blogging

The author, Dane F. Baylis

How Have I Done On My New Year's Resolutions?

Or

No, That Really Isn't Where I Want To Go Tonight.

 
Yes the top part is tonight's prompt. Let me give you the synopsis. I'M WRITING MY ASS OFF!  Short fiction, the novel project (Outline, major characters and scene list finalized, first draft underway), poetry...a constant as it has always been...This blogging challenge, The Ventura County Writer's Club, Google + Poetry Community's Weekly Post-a-Thon....My studies with the Center for Buddhist Education in Berkley...40 hours plus on the day job...Yup, that about damn well covers it.
 
Now then, on the topic of finding ideas to write about. What, was that too abrupt?...Come on now...You're really going to have to keep up or I'll have to institute quizzes....Finding topics.
The poetry part of my mind is strange that way. I've never really paid much attention to where the ideas come from. Sometimes it's something overheard on the radio or in a conversation I've eavesdropped on...(See the picture of me in the upper left? Memorize it! If you see me in public you might end up in a poem.)...or a phrase in a book or the newspaper. I also have the ethics of a blues musician...If it sounds good, I'll steal it!
 
Fiction is another story...(I know, but I never said I was above a pun!). I am a list writer. I will sit down and intentionally write out lists of ideas. Simple things like, dog bites man/man bites back...girl falls in love with priest...obsessed guitarist...whatever. Sometimes it can be words. I'll intentionally list colors, or words that invoke temperature, or words that are linked to water...Then I'll go outside and wait for the ambulance from the home to come pick me up and take me back to that well upholstered room. Sorry, I wasn't supposed to tell you about that.
 
I put the lists aside and let them marinate for...however long it takes, no recipes or formulas here. In the meantime, I return to the present hot project. Down the road I pull these lists out and review them. What I'm looking for is something that raises an emotional response. Does something strike me as funny...odd...sad...scary? If that happens I try to expand the feeling. What about the girl attracted to the priest? Does he show a complementary reaction? Is he non-plussed? Does she press her point or try to hide it because of shame?
 
I'm testing my own emotional reaction to the thoughts. Is it just interesting? Does it make me really uncomfortable? Does it revolt or anger me? The stronger my feeling the better because it is strength of emotion that your reader is looking for. If I feel lukewarm about something going in, how am I going to get the reader to want to come along? Does the emotional investment intensify as the story progresses? Then maybe I want to get rid of that opening and start where my emotions got really involved?
 
That's what story telling is about...hooking your audiences heart and getting them to laugh, cry, cheer or shout in triumph. Not everything that hits the lists I make becomes a tale. As a matter of fact the vast majority just goes back in the drawer. If I find one thing in twenty that starts the emotional kettle boiling I'm doing good. The key is that I take the time to do lists at least once or twice a week. Right now I have a backlog of ideas that have been expanded in to rough outlines that have some real potential. Enough to keep me going long past considerations of writer's block.
 
 
Accepting short fiction to 1200 words, poetry to 25 lines, and carefully crafted essays for the Your Work/Your Love page. Nope, still no pay, just glorious exposure! You can send your work to me via e-mail at dbaylis805@gmail.com. Authors retain all rights. You can also follow or subscribe to this blog. There are gadgets for that on the right side of this page. I love the company and it helps with the search engine ranking. Comments, critiques, and questions are always answered in as timely a manner as I can manage between my day job, writing, studies, blah, blah, blah. There's a form at the bottom of the page for your use.

In the meantime, remember...live, love, write.
Dane F. Baylis